Were better off dead

Written by M.J.M

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 Were better off dead

The steel so cold the trigger so hot

Tomorrow my life will be forgot

I raise the barrel up to my head to see my brain absorb hot lead

Sweat sweeps up threw my pours cold as ice I think no more

To hear my heart beat through my ears my eyes fight back the cold dry tears

The pressure threw my finger slides the trigger snaps I’m still alive

The gun so empty like my life but as the smart old wise man said life is hell

Were better off dead

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avatar Emily Louise Heeks
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omg :'( that is such a upsetting poem. i literly cried :(
Thursday 03 December 2009, 11:25
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avatar chango kazi
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i dint cry
Monday 01 February 2010, 12:03
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avatar michelle
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i aiiyntt cry
Monday 22 February 2010, 11:10
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avatar G-MEN
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SRRY BT HONESTLY I DIDNT CYR>>>> :(
Sunday 02 May 2010, 08:26
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avatar william
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that poem was deep



































































Sunday 14 March 2010, 18:04
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avatar IT RAINS SKITTLES
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I LOVED IT
Sunday 23 May 2010, 02:58
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avatar Mr. Silichy
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Although a beautiful topic, its kinda a crap poem. Scrap the rhyme :)
Tuesday 25 May 2010, 09:42
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